【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
5 l2 Q& p% L; _6 C7 }. T袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ S8 q1 ~! l% HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
3 k' n" x# |' O. f5 q9 A1 X; W我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
9 K" a' W) L$ T+ h你已經深深的佔領了
3 F7 B1 J1 v: |. n- [# e我的心

! ?4 @2 ~0 _) Q% C7 p* [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
$ I7 u' P7 q, Q" Q2 `; g還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 y9 j2 u# F  j8 [0 t$ n! v' H凝視著你的眼
$ v- i3 i2 O' D* z; d搜尋著你的魂
+ H0 M: F7 D3 j我也許就能了解
你的心情
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0 S3 I6 _+ m; r3 o  O- V7 qLove… just the word love
- G$ J9 S) ~5 t' V5 o" W% i5 T2 ?5 b2 {: QWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
' ]' h1 A+ z4 `3 j* ?5 h2 E2 R4 |為什麼
6 B4 I! P/ B* W) s5 _! T* ~如此難以表白?
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" y+ Q  e) k" J' z+ V1 x- }- |" yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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, ~1 i, h% Y6 w) \9 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 K: _$ ^3 ~% v2 Z8 f/ I9 y也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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. M2 P& B$ n# ]/ {" fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
  S, h) e/ L8 ?! [# }我心底的秘密

8 K/ h0 Y- n0 ~7 i5 R4 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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5 R1 ?/ A/ u- OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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7 s/ @/ G/ M  e- \2 v愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

+ @7 k& O( p" N" r6 P  v% y& xI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
! l" Q$ m: I7 O% x% F) m卻還是說不出來

3 z6 f3 Z5 S/ w$ Y) L0 a+ Y- D6 y9 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

, j( D: T/ H- Z8 A+ e也許有一天
  d+ s2 m* W  l; b# F5 [6 s你將從我指間滑漏
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/ {2 Y( [: P- P) PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
. V0 J7 N% o  I  f讓我向你表白
# \: E0 q7 u# \7 V6 `我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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) S  b  x# P# B  e) Z9 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
4 v6 K$ m$ f, f9 ?& h* f托付我的愛
. I6 _6 A: J9 h收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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% M$ ~( I/ @# T可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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8 U' F, n) H2 A9 _对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
# ^. H7 i, `2 Q/ N# ]7 M( b1 e, wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
. E+ i4 J; m- H: q; e4 p( j  b天空金銀閃爍
/ |( r* Y: K1 n5 m: t& f. m. K1 m凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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; l7 E" X: U  r! }4 z& ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 m# \" |* M' y6 t- w' pThe sky is happy down to its soul
- _1 p0 x. L; i( _2 @% UWith the moon kissing it every night
$ k8 r/ f" M/ J, ^8 fSeeing the sky content with its love

# y3 K; K+ `! \, Y) X月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
% e3 ^0 R( \9 L1 f. k: U4 W" p; N星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
8 k' o, _% ?6 S: G- H6 n害怕我們的愛
& ^$ i) N6 d% ^* a, G4 I8 v終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
6 \/ y7 _6 f* G愛你
) V% k5 q1 }) t堅定不渝
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8 C7 Z; k# ]' U! }" p$ |4 fEvery other word you utter is love
2 n- u! h' Q: b0 _0 QI really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
% _2 Y2 z4 w$ _0 r* jNothing can compare to my love
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7 R# C* E* _& p+ {5 f7 {% k( D我的愛 全心全意
5 C8 F. h1 T0 D+ l# {% O你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

# V! S* o& |- @, b2 f+ l3 ~4 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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' C  B( }: U+ V2 e6 @能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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  F  V& y/ l" l. t, GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
# Z/ z  v6 S" [* E6 Q; fTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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7 B( [% U) H2 s3 ~( }- w我歡迎你將它打開
1 _: s# o0 D* S( F7 s7 t我願意用生命
! k: ^: W4 T$ j4 t  v9 @; A來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

& j& `: c+ i& `/ }: o0 M( qI regret not dying
6 |& N8 Z2 q& \8 b  i& PI only have one tongue
  E% D0 c, n* b- R0 N: TIt’s nothing close to 100,000

' f0 ~6 v. {3 }可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
- C$ d+ J9 F+ I& z% ]遠遠不及千萬

+ m: u5 C: `5 g# D4 gWith such a tongue as yours,
1 e% ~9 Y9 G& C- GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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5 g, @& i  U4 A1 C, {這樣一張巧舌
7 m9 d( f, }" f4 d: E你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% S" {1 n# J1 K2 h9 {& B, b0 }如果我真有千百張口
/ }) C6 m* y( X$ r我將對你訴說
6 y# C2 w- r2 C# }" _. |, k) w0 j/ \千萬個心思
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. v! H( e/ ^$ h$ P8 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

3 u- X; j& i' ]+ ]" S3 s訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
& A5 S: b# @. H+ dxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒