【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% {# K- P3 [  P2 C7 A' K+ T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* B  D) {8 E% W+ \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 u" s" U/ z0 {The sky is happy down to its soul
+ n, g% i' t6 S( \2 }6 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( o1 U. e$ t; y7 t' |; M" {" ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  D1 g( C$ S! g  a( TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  f, ?* s1 |) M4 c# u( CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 n1 o4 o3 _1 |7 u8 F- I, P6 TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Q  Y0 _7 A( |% l! e2 Z( XI’m still filled with fear
9 z7 g7 c  _- M' y( |( }' {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" D2 T* ?/ ~7 s4 r. [! K% lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 P0 Q5 H8 g0 }! m  bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; z( S3 H* ]) \" d* _! I4 a. ]# r& pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( U# ]6 m! e+ N0 E) M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 p& Q, s- c- L2 D' a! G  ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% t3 Z3 C$ D5 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% E, \0 N+ i# h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 E9 ?6 Q  |( a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 f$ _0 ?: M$ p$ \1 l, w  J" y% u" N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. p" F6 ?' ^6 |; Q/ B6 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- p6 M3 C+ u. S0 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 f6 O. W% V5 W( s) u, F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 M$ @" H5 V& r7 e; {  S  b5 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  o1 z# A" c6 d1 E, C+ U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( r" n  h9 M+ |$ C* D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 Y7 \. G0 X+ [" @3 f  j, C, h$ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& h! H- W6 v, s$ n; L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. g8 I, Z" C. |& ^0 R3 [; L/ C# |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# U6 G# Z1 B& S1 K4 ^! @* z- I' Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, l) F% O& A: m. g; n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% }# n1 x( w7 v5 j/ P1 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. o+ Z: Y- h( V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ E; v! m8 q7 x0 S9 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( o4 X* m, H' H6 _2 d1 Y/ s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" I8 {% ]! v0 ^# I5 X<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; [5 v0 Q8 ]  b2 H/ G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  a, M" f& g' J" H  p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ G6 s: v- p# H4 o( F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! A# d/ `; j( A. q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ ]/ K" ]$ f) v9 Q6 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. {! k+ y' a# m! e3 V9 J* j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, _- C' ^% a0 F! `: m5 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>