【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: y9 A) M6 _/ r7 R' i0 d歌词我附在后面。
/ N  ?- e, O8 x& N! t; p6 n! eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  W/ k5 P5 J+ f* G) G+ rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& }5 [% l& B4 b2 R: I3 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ Y4 L$ S4 o4 u) VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; n# U. B8 d. A+ O" y9 K8 v2 Y2 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* |9 N6 j4 q# i9 D  LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 u6 _) Q7 j+ P% b3 K. SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ A7 n9 a6 U8 r- G8 ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" J/ u3 {) \+ K+ x5 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 J0 y4 A2 @5 ~, ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; |) p: x. e* x* B" |9 C$ C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 {- P7 O1 i* K7 F2 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 `; t2 }8 P4 l! m: g, e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) ?5 H. Q( j& }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 o  L' O1 W& h: u  R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 m3 |$ D& `, c8 t/ T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  p+ |; R" Q) t. {" B4 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% |8 \" q" B) X( w- B- X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 T! _3 [& _$ V3 Z3 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 n. U  h0 m: {7 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ a5 z7 z5 ^) t; x0 \4 H) G  {9 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ ^" f! ^- [* I9 T1 d. R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( o# H) n9 V, K7 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 U$ v" P: ]+ Z3 R2 {7 j6 C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# z! U, L+ f( ^* D3 A+ W, U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 S" @$ L& I0 B  i: E- m7 D- w+ ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' Q( ~9 e  W! I8 G  r* F" v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 E* ]8 `0 }  Y) k! P1 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 L( |' |7 E- R3 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. S% d5 i( {) Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 }5 w! z" Y# j; Q; Y/ F' d<P>I regret not dying</P>
  `; J7 |+ \/ S0 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 i* R- }2 E5 k1 u& ?5 E. _8 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) Z2 n. B) m7 z# Z( X& O* x% l2 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' H4 z% t/ c. C$ D( |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" Q: a# t1 h% b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% N, _3 @2 D, v' M我请你剖开它
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9 O! y1 G; d2 Q1 S7 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>