【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- k  `$ C3 Q# Q! o( A歌词我附在后面。
) P/ _7 I4 q. M( j& A$ JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 X# Z) e) n3 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) g4 x8 t( y5 d; @! M; FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, `; o5 v( _# H/ _1 ~: j% xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ U9 @' [# X; ^4 @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" b2 C3 Z: J2 t6 a. \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 j0 @/ i9 B, @% H) gI want so much to see inside your heart
" c4 |7 l$ j" g/ NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) {6 K$ h3 U# L8 HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 Q5 \' {' `: H/ yWith such a tongue as yours,
8 z9 \5 F$ i/ W/ x- d& V6 y7 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 _# @$ Y3 U: S  V- qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 ^7 z# d5 W! F6 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 z  K! ]/ R& D) Z8 k* F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' R, n( c  v! h2 [  M) g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 V8 t1 ]; i# G3 o3 M; U& S5 H; z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ B, d# a0 [* ?8 R+ y7 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 W. v- L% x9 _( `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" Y8 s0 r( e) S0 C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 R6 v# ~1 O/ y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 d7 ?& F# {1 D) h% J3 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ U8 }& Q* K( c" Z* W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 {# M" m7 H6 u4 j3 E2 B# Q) x3 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( v( W" Z; f# I4 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 o( ~8 G: ^3 N" N: ~* z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 S7 z9 ^6 ~5 U! c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 ?7 w& u" ]5 ?, _3 [- u( B) N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& I. V/ m" f: {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 z  w1 f" j) y( }/ }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 ]  U* Y# r  x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 u) h: K! {8 J) c% w# ~' m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ \. d8 I5 W$ T- u& I# x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. B$ p3 y2 n7 o" |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ R5 S; O+ i& X% R. @' {( ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- K( _5 ^( h& C( u& s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 x3 Z, {- O. W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ _- p4 }$ ~$ F9 b! O1 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. C8 e! f! ]$ M# r9 l7 O  w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  v# ~3 U. V& h8 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

. ^" E, i) s# f" N, H1 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 W' Z( r* m; ?. M' [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>