【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# _. G5 H* i1 y) E- Y4 Z: V0 O0 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 E6 Y4 m) [6 q9 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 N, U; q- M) U- Z7 P% k1 j( [; i) `The sky is happy down to its soul
3 b% X8 W  Z. f! l$ sWith the moon kissing it every night
' v/ s+ C- [$ a2 \# G0 FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* s$ h/ j8 E% M. H; H' {: aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ {. m  J1 w7 N" M/ k) uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 W" ^( ?6 J5 v( R* c5 e3 f9 LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) ]1 K+ M2 p- b: f7 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ [! Y# B9 V2 t. M2 m) P9 j3 l% P3 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 E9 x2 C6 c5 {; y3 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% N& T2 M4 B! w4 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! E/ ~, n  d; A6 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* k% |6 s) [4 J  I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ q. F5 F( ?6 }9 i& [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ E1 y7 S" J2 s: I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% T# O7 N# K  \9 Y1 {5 O0 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' y2 v) d' z0 h$ C) t4 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* Z" W$ w' t5 d& F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 u! ~/ m/ `; {2 d9 f  p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" a8 Q) l% p! o9 }4 E& g/ h8 W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) J6 O; f8 v2 Q. I: d: X- t. q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 _" u# k# n% [- \# j# H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- E7 P5 c4 z& m; a2 B# e$ X  i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" {* F$ P( @1 Y4 }& t- k7 l+ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# [; [2 j( i* S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 [' b9 i8 h$ g% F) L0 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 `6 w1 J; p5 \* E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* S0 J6 x$ Q! ^5 Y; q+ ]/ J) c5 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 E3 O4 H6 H3 w% w( G) Y8 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: J4 L9 F& c5 b+ ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, b7 F' L% J, f7 s# k% h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: A& [/ k8 L/ ~" c3 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ s9 h2 O" ?* n7 P! T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! ?# {! |7 G: W$ M9 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>