【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! s; J) q3 y% v7 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! z' V' ?6 D: E, \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ L% o1 L' i3 X- S9 b8 x+ QThe sky is happy down to its soul
, Q  L. ?0 v( \9 A, U+ D/ m: M8 V# ^With the moon kissing it every night
! q/ s; ~" ~& j+ b9 v( m5 ?: Q7 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 R9 m; q5 P* b- P2 h& ^6 k# X$ }4 gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 O" r' a4 a; \4 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ U5 m; ^! i9 VNothing can compare to my love
: n  l# i# j& y1 L# OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ v  ~* ~. l0 b; y6 O& WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) K. p7 `. f* J8 G5 gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 q* ^0 R; Z. DI’m still filled with fear
& ?* Q- v% w; H; Q& d/ N* QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* y* [4 s: X( L" N/ @# N* n9 }# D$ PI regret not dying
  V, C: f- u3 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! h/ [2 E  D" e4 z& E6 [6 h! n  dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 T) {! w  Q" w( h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ^! v4 @) D  t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 p2 N* G' h4 P6 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; [" |# u# r: y; Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; H* y: m$ |! ]+ H4 U. o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 R0 f7 r6 ~; t1 z! l! }- A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ C3 N4 R  r2 V, h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 D/ z0 Q  I% G& C. o) F! l$ A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- |/ \6 ~1 W9 K2 r+ W3 g! r<P>你无需担心</P>
0 ^8 ~% I7 g  k7 [$ s$ E- r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 Z9 J9 p7 M, {+ p3 I: a: O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ {! G; `/ O$ m  H/ R0 a2 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; y2 V) n6 b' W! n3 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. D( @! h" i* g" z% n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  l- H0 Q2 L! P1 V  {1 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# t, u4 v5 y4 z! c! [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: r# f- z! k! E; M; S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, g- b& ]; `- V3 l% R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% g9 S6 p3 L1 s; x, V- M5 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  w! z/ |9 E0 J8 f0 {8 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  b5 R+ n+ R5 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ [& ]/ ]  Y+ \8 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  E& U- p- a) Z% ]0 V+ n8 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* u: z) N, r5 ?7 z0 ?, k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 P' t- ^) }8 o( h9 v1 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 ?$ x9 d0 ?7 U) J; B+ O; n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) a7 {: U0 l$ Y9 t' M& U' {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" a9 s( B8 S1 _( g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 X% b* J: }; N5 v( V3 `/ a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 W9 k! [: w, D( {我请你剖开它

8 g2 |) U% v& z8 g5 p8 u% ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>