【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: `3 G. O* q* l& X* JWith the moon kissing it every night
& }9 [' _4 p) p! l, Q) S& [7 b0 WSeeing the sky content with its love
7 M( t! p' }9 t% E( b* G7 S% DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) \5 A6 `! d: q% n  S: LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# k: E$ u1 l. j) E+ CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 |1 G6 G7 G) ~8 l- c) BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 v( S3 p& d0 r8 y: bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' G; a& h2 o( ]' S8 X* aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# T& i! R, x+ \! g7 |( f0 d2 rWith such a tongue as yours,
: {, P: D6 ^6 H! ]) y: M& g* ]0 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 _" r* q% X" f6 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ G) \: h( W. X0 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 B) ]" u. g- |$ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 `' [; f) @$ q; ~3 f& l/ a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 ~; x2 k! h! G$ p, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 E8 ^" }1 ]6 X: Q! F! S" |% h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& l' C; n' W6 u9 j' {; o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- y: n  }  _+ F4 ^  Z+ J. [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 c) T- t( f2 K- ^5 ^9 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ?4 I5 b' r3 L* L8 }, H; v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. `/ `  V# g- y4 b6 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" u  `& t8 A* V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  B8 Q. F& c  N- U' h* f/ h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ c/ \* C' Z/ t& n% Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( F3 C+ F/ u1 W# o+ D% A9 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% q5 b, ], K# Z0 `5 ?% u# d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) ~6 j) Q) v& F' }5 O4 N% m7 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 ^& x/ t- z: `! Z4 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- A5 c; O1 T' g6 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- C: O/ [- U5 c2 [! D" a) @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  K" g# V: |8 f1 _8 Y0 O& J& X: \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* b$ [9 C) R( v- u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; c8 c# _* P+ ^8 Q( `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- n+ d8 T& M/ E* h/ I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, B* v. J# A$ ^, @; G% o: R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* V" g7 ?+ b# |8 ^1 X" b9 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: ~4 s; r" J% Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>