【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) ?6 i( t2 D( J& P" N( e  N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 Y6 M  j) \8 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# ~6 F; Z1 U+ N& X! LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ x$ y, q, l" E, x" tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: W, }2 B) ?7 I( @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' [/ M: s5 Z% C9 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 {  X+ M* @# T3 d% aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' @; }- ^  R2 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. l# d- v  a; s1 {9 C* ?2 H" ]* L+ AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, G1 H! N  e$ nI want so much to see inside your heart
! Q, n, H+ Y5 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: {+ ?8 j  N/ S! MI’m still filled with fear
" q" B2 Y; p4 d. M& u% k% D$ L& QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( i) e" j" }/ f0 xI regret not dying
5 B$ P  {" o, }! K: Y( E4 b- y( tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) ]: I+ d5 P- @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" k- {% A& ~8 h& _  y: LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' L6 w3 }! [6 r  R' U" k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 v+ N3 d6 z! Z, [4 K3 O' [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: Y: B# _2 Z( `2 V  t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# o* t5 ^% M( b: }. {0 e7 B$ ?% r0 n  v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) h3 c( D' K: c) N1 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& X. {4 d3 `7 g1 k9 ?* V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 b; G! y' L( z/ q9 }9 f! S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 \8 C* N' ?0 t9 b% [4 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 X  `- R; K; ^! `8 E& p. f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 Y& ]  y, x! o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 n5 `- f8 a# g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" N/ l9 y2 v7 G& f" L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 S2 g6 o. U. V( o/ @% H) ?, R/ E9 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 w& i' Z& M( e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# Q) W' D8 [  N* \# a  D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* m7 A7 L' @' Y8 \- m) v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: v- {& G# I* G. H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# W& e& o6 i3 W0 t" S+ t& g/ Q6 q! D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 Q' J8 }9 A: Y/ Q$ V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 `" Z; l; z( g  s: W4 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; q- L" z' R9 |) M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" r; R# I7 |( P( d: i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; e8 b6 d- X! ]. v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% M& S) ~+ `6 }' H1 k+ s, E3 q6 f5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ [1 @' x, V" s0 r- r) h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; i5 T; h# X$ ~9 ]" H3 ^3 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- O" K8 M2 m4 `* D% c* s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" h. v  ^& p, o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' e. K: U3 o0 n+ l9 j' s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( i+ P! s/ i# p5 T* Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) g: w& W/ j3 \6 v. d$ ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 n, l" y( ~/ z% _. f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 Z$ }2 w# s2 l: y9 _1 _7 v- V  M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, W* {( t2 r  {6 f9 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ p' j8 x, R, W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' S& n+ a/ j0 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- V. i" E. {$ d8 {  r我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>