【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 V  ~3 T' O/ w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 X) X4 d( _5 BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 z/ q( Z4 {; o8 o& m! L8 M- cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- t" y4 {9 \3 s: _2 [- N: W: v+ O, [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 o: P$ Z$ Q" V7 [% [+ zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 X% y" g4 D* L/ \5 PI love you I love you with all my heart
# _8 x- }, Z8 i/ o) o- SNothing can compare to my love
4 W/ `7 D* ~( o! b+ H2 u& i: i: `0 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 j' [7 ~7 t& V" }. ^7 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ T. U2 Q+ f; P/ Z/ _5 }3 j+ tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 u& k( t& t# i% J+ r# zI’m still filled with fear
* Q. }: P/ B6 xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 P5 n5 g1 s9 i- c  D9 oI regret not dying
( L: C% t- x+ ]: F2 T5 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 Z5 r' ~- o  t; w# }6 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# k0 {4 p; Y) Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" r* @3 l0 T& E% n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! D" }4 a3 M# P) V2 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 h/ ]: L; o# m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 }( e, w* P! N# m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 _- ~" e/ H" J# Q4 D# {; O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* z9 c2 E6 r2 ^" F* C1 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 ^' f3 S) ^1 t" j1 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 p% l0 @1 X1 B% H0 e7 B1 P& X' r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 U9 I3 {+ o* w  Q* k4 B$ g- D: P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 M% J. S4 E# `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 L2 z" P! d' g& ]  m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. g2 a7 v# {( ^  R3 c' C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* h5 T. F& t" x) q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; g# Y2 I. X( }$ P' ]" R8 ~; ?) y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& Z: f' U! C: ]$ X/ T/ f" B7 D/ ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& B$ K# x( j9 u+ ]& a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 P% r9 O7 x0 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ V; o9 d( m) C, _, C; \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% Y* T6 p3 T) N2 D5 c2 m2 L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" C$ H7 R" b  E% `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; ^8 k0 W( k  ~3 L' a( b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! r# T9 z& C5 @4 i& J& [$ R) D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" V+ }8 w6 C- g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% d8 E6 E# a! X% m9 ]7 r! M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 b+ n( d* x; ~: o/ A' V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* T7 L2 u* T$ Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 a& D  V& U' v- _/ U( N) L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' I) i7 m. I; t* z2 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  O9 b$ o/ n' P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! X; }* u+ j) j! m6 T4 _* p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>