【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ l2 E3 v5 @& l( dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 z) p& O2 [  A7 @/ R0 p+ TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- [$ K! [, o! n! @) b7 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 K* S1 z( k- c# \9 KI really want to know just how much you love me
! q. M7 G5 L" C' {& R! KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# `, p' e' n6 {% @+ c" vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 R5 T8 C! N& xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 g9 O' f% W! i$ O5 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 X$ `4 F# X! Y" d) Q9 `, i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( G8 a; L+ u  n! k+ `* V  |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 i% Q2 H2 X( \3 e" C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 |8 `7 R, ?4 _! R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 M! _3 n! }$ q  S* g, q8 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 E8 u. C% W- }( j8 m9 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* D8 f$ o6 W7 q2 G1 l9 H0 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ A, T) a1 x+ O3 U1 Q5 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 p! ?* l3 _# o0 U1 g/ f4 E<P>你无需担心</P>
; u8 M6 S) I; V7 U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' o& E' `# U; Y4 Z4 i% h& b2 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) s8 \" I$ L6 J1 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" m7 f+ ?  r, i. _: O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' q$ r; R" D& c; W: ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( b5 Y$ r- b* U$ }; t  V& q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 G! k& z( H9 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' m/ ~% y  V% y. W  M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 l  w# x' u5 z& Y+ o+ E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' s1 c# z6 Q! n7 [+ p7 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 h( I$ B0 E8 B7 @9 t$ E3 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( {& _# Z8 s$ o" f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# d/ S2 \4 k/ J. J* \- K! t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; j: r- T& \% g( C& Y4 S( M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# V0 R7 I5 Q2 T/ K( k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 l% ~  N5 O' h! s. T% I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ y& R% u& U6 Q2 o7 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: H8 h8 F8 w6 `6 S! c7 Z+ j6 L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' y+ ~% U. v9 |5 m. z) _# b5 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>