【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 \; s& F) J5 X8 ]1 M4 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Q. k3 a2 O' J* B# z! D$ uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 u* ?; g4 ?* y" pThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ ~) [. c( b; ~- _( ~- E* G2 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, w1 i5 y# N% OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 g8 Z6 C! G, M) s, e; hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. _4 \, d1 v* V$ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# X& ?  m6 A8 a* ]8 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' U6 |- p4 ~# SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- h# s3 o; U) B! i7 |; {. [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- z! b; K! X% w4 lWith such a tongue as yours,
: ~# T% G. Y  K$ @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 v( W+ j  H- H  _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 w4 ]+ k! `7 t- t- E# R* [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% z$ \% r6 I" N% G7 v+ c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% u' U% S. u: s$ W8 N- P5 R) u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# J) w3 {2 W& Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' i/ Z6 A4 K4 Q5 j+ S7 y' O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& f+ f& L9 X2 a3 c! W! Q) z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ c0 V: Z! I6 y( K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& w& h0 s; x$ Z* \* B! o$ o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. q4 O3 d; P6 D1 Z6 A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 S: i6 V( J  i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; Y* G6 f  q$ c6 d3 H7 [0 n0 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" f: p/ }4 ~- B& L% \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* f7 m! |. y0 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 z" B" }& r6 p  l0 _6 F! `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' o% v) K$ V0 @/ F3 h. |0 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ E5 I6 o6 K% C: I* g7 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ Y1 u0 o5 B, R9 R" n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, R5 D) c# A# L! V4 |4 s, F9 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 a7 S$ F$ N' \* O" Z  T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: W) a- K0 n; a* e5 y9 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- q: x, d$ ?& l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& q! Y. d4 k! m+ g6 R$ b* W& U+ E  [$ R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" z- K! m" {& h0 S3 n5 R7 H5 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, R! l- _( L7 y( M% w! Z; Z# i( C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: G0 e3 r( ^2 r  m, t- g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( R- r; r/ c: E/ K+ K3 M) _我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>