【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 _2 Q7 v6 s6 w3 t- mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% a8 D7 q2 Y1 ?- h# z7 M  a0 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 O2 k2 c/ j+ ~% y/ v3 I1 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ w3 @* h, m1 _+ xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 J' B  M. G6 F. V: nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 J: ?' `% M8 d' y) Y8 [, |& wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 G& j; a6 s* m; R" j2 H6 p7 V& fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 E( f" q+ k+ Q0 |$ [# }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ Z: H8 u+ P" CI love you I love you with all my heart
: q$ K0 h5 B5 a% H# A& N* u* nNothing can compare to my love
5 j* V6 E& _* d. {8 O3 w- _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ W& {- {2 E0 Y$ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 |. E! L0 A" ~* {' T* u/ k  PI want so much to see inside your heart
9 z( l+ A. C' W6 W4 F$ b1 i; e2 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 Q; _& u: L8 q* k: W4 tI regret not dying
% R2 p. h1 s  w" L! rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 g, q- }2 O8 W8 T9 L& h1 P+ IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, _) {' f4 p7 [4 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 }  Y5 v+ ?2 J8 c; j0 l2 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 _$ U" b3 K2 W! d% f$ q  [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 v- K9 f7 ]" H- O* w) ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- Q. R/ r; w! g! V; r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! q1 t$ H' ?: I3 ^7 g7 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! P# N2 N6 q6 L7 S0 z8 z7 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  g2 A  p8 |) \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& m' P( d6 a  A" v6 i$ P, W2 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* F1 q7 m2 g$ s9 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* M$ F6 P0 o9 D4 f% s+ v+ L) G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( H; @* S; s6 n9 ^" |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 C7 U& l) g  v; }' h9 W  t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, F" m: V% S* i+ j. q2 g" X* }: ^* ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 K5 D) d: Y! P1 d4 S* c) T: u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! x/ m) [$ \' c8 j9 g, ~* k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. X1 _; E4 k. o! l0 q5 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ P0 n& X' E' N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, @# f+ Q) x8 W5 T3 [7 ~# E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 H: V+ x3 G/ _2 l9 g7 [$ u* R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 M. O1 z1 l" \4 l5 R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! J* B( S2 ^, x- C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( ?. A0 E, `# e% b: s& \0 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 `" o# E' k0 r8 `/ c) y) m4 D8 i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 f2 H+ F3 Y; ~: H9 S( F; T' D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 i& F3 P$ r) _+ w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- l, i  \3 @' m( V8 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>