【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 R* g/ C/ V" D4 ?3 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) `% j  v7 G& g1 N! i/ W+ @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ ^! W4 j- t" @2 m) b2 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# Z; v; Z1 J- E. w' I8 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' Y- o6 J. _$ l! l4 ?) r( nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 S& a1 X4 ?/ W" _5 t9 y1 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 I" S# k% e0 T: j% P4 d/ t. D8 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) I/ Y1 X5 O) h4 q5 B+ ?* eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  @5 }6 ^8 e' TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 H, x# L7 @1 h" l! Z+ bI regret not dying
8 P# X) y% f1 T  g) nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 u# Y5 e9 B* w4 R8 y& ~With such a tongue as yours,
5 ^( U5 [" L: I- _. GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# X" C  n* T5 o6 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( K4 x! Z/ I1 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% |3 v6 I0 \9 }( T$ f1 L7 S3 k2 ]. }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' r3 A: _( F; {5 {1 _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 ], {7 V1 @$ r* ?# B6 F% L! T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# j' V. Y+ W6 q+ ?$ q) u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 e! M' J( a- T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% |5 e) p- e) x8 X$ i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* v* g' S# j5 Z  E# T9 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 b2 O% C8 R' U& M8 f3 _* g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ q% }& d8 E2 l, L* ]6 M* E; W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ z0 u, X# B! j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( i- X1 M+ \  K<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( k: K6 j7 G5 y* s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; c( [# F- n1 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- k; R9 b1 \7 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 `* Y5 t- x9 ]3 A+ t0 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 H: X4 [( e  \1 @; G0 W$ L& w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ Y' r4 L" K) F2 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: j2 G0 f( F( ?! N' ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& B. q. N  v. u- V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& _. A' _$ y2 Q3 t8 N7 Y/ M3 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( C5 `* G, f+ \: m/ E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 C% G% P6 h( x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 H" P: F# [9 Q) j0 L" }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 r# D% [% K/ k% N3 u0 w0 A8 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 v6 \: ^9 X! A2 b0 Q7 W. B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 f, r# }1 {! O4 Z: {* V8 b" s, v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: ]: X4 g" V# g6 `9 E1 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ Z" b3 w- M, @$ p: u7 l' h; \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 t) P8 i4 o0 w7 J. z2 ?我请你剖开它
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+ f2 Y. R" U- o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 H9 i" ]6 t  D5 @+ N; N1 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>