【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 e# t/ w5 G3 s) `5 l! nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) d# X5 k0 p' d0 V5 C1 {2 S  aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& A/ J" y% V3 ^1 e7 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' S( B! l. {( m# ?6 o) lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 v- P  J/ E1 d* \, i4 J+ e3 C8 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- f/ @4 K8 b# k  J8 }1 g  aYou needn’t fear anything
) y$ f2 k! n% M# b) n/ _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" k/ Z/ M$ m- b. ]+ k4 A( T# v7 M' zEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 \/ ^/ \) f7 LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ~5 J2 L7 g& Z% H5 @8 F- R) B4 bI’m still filled with fear
& T5 }1 n6 z" L6 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* |- e' `2 ?8 W/ k# c$ _With such a tongue as yours,
& D4 n) u1 H- J: P. b. t; h6 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 t0 F- w% ^% x+ p0 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( w% |' j  r6 O, E* D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( z" x+ O' x0 L0 E' q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 [; f, r/ {0 z' a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ c3 t( e( S# }, g, z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 `4 h5 Q7 k( x9 j) u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: r. D0 p1 P3 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  \  U4 ^: X& Z8 t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 @# n1 d. p& L1 C$ t+ O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! v  f( l0 I! G; y' ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 W; n- _( t+ v" K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; S1 F8 H' b8 e4 V/ [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 v1 r  \: z' V" s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 `! Q* z) {4 W3 C! `: c( O, o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 N  J* K4 z3 M0 o2 G& h, ?, n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" O! Q; Z$ F0 D: R<P>I regret not dying</P>
: o8 I0 n6 {' h8 s/ A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ a3 }3 b6 w9 \* a, k3 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# c/ r& `; h  ?0 h6 |4 g) t& \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  L7 v9 c5 m+ `1 i2 i/ k+ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* P0 P. I: L' `6 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ x' K# u: y+ f1 r0 q3 j7 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% _: _9 f) x9 n9 [& R<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* j2 ?4 j% l. b0 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 x) V% \* R  k& `+ `; Y& ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- s1 {5 j1 j, P/ {9 q& y) v0 ?% ]- t我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 L$ K: u1 k- i' C0 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>