【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& M+ |- N6 k( P% V, h! h" |* i8 ^8 f. yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 f! ]  I+ [$ R. Q# BSeeing the sky content with its love
# [$ T( V  f, L* w6 @+ f5 j" GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 H* [* d8 L* S2 X+ JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. r2 x; b' M0 M$ w/ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 g' v1 [+ e1 ?: s1 p( |% |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 @% u/ ?9 S) g# ?; N( qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ O4 y5 H% V, o3 N% `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( I/ q% d- T7 u  M0 H3 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# I0 V9 g& Q1 V+ {' l* U! ], I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ L  {3 Q1 ?5 S0 m, A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- d) y- s6 b- ^' @* X3 O& T/ E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 B+ Y0 |& \& Y4 J! I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" D) A7 `8 J: b( r: Q% X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 }0 F/ F; P: q5 \5 C! f7 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& l4 {, I9 z5 Q' \" J+ r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 J5 D5 E2 _7 t& ~7 E# z% ?5 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 q# }* y+ L  s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) ~# L* y2 A2 ^$ G! B9 O+ \+ s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: t3 j, ^$ U! O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 \' P9 G+ p' a6 J( U5 a/ ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ S$ B: Z8 N2 m6 n  I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; \  P" I. m2 ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 ?5 V1 \( C/ t) W5 Q0 R; i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 p0 R! Q7 I1 u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 v2 U4 g& `( d! a7 {! R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. T2 \3 |; d$ u8 Q$ C( l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& f3 H  `/ ~* E2 [: }5 [- b, n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 Y2 p) V- P6 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( w* C7 Q- X! d: f6 z3 F$ X7 C; R, A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ k5 t) ?4 k' i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 D) U- i4 q% B/ @9 E7 c2 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: G- k( R& h1 s* d* ~4 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>