【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 M6 C+ K) R+ L  }The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  Z' {7 A4 p4 x/ L" a* MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* n3 ], W7 d5 j1 }. eThe sky is happy down to its soul
, O* `4 c$ T) {* [With the moon kissing it every night
, n1 d1 H! h0 h# H6 q/ \# ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 E, A! r3 g. r# ]! y" ?. oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" u) K- w5 Y) U& kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" M. g2 Y/ J' M, F, ]# L# e( TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 M+ q: m/ W! N" W4 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 P) j; q7 ]  g# H& QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  I& T8 ?/ @; ~! cWith such a tongue as yours,
8 v5 E" q: e$ f1 j7 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& D& f6 w9 ^- v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* T! [  S- t0 A7 W5 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 a& r( ?( K" G+ v2 e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. f. _$ o' `" U& G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# Z  ?7 @4 `. H  _' \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) C$ z! z0 l5 F; A1 K- f; y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 ]8 f$ s) {/ ^2 s6 O% e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 f0 f4 c6 ]3 y1 t+ b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% K4 P: W6 K/ l/ c- \' R& ~& |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" x/ M8 v: z0 N# T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 L7 K" k; F0 a; |6 R  C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' J# c7 h! Y. I, e9 ^! ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; q/ y6 }8 B* E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& p/ [. b3 E, ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. |6 K3 V% m% d0 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 C7 D/ w1 B1 h3 {1 l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; X- x. h$ M* I* w+ S7 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* U! K+ F4 n0 ?* b$ c$ X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Z6 l3 K& t2 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 }) b4 b3 M' b( q/ c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 m7 I, z! O1 I8 H6 Z7 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ }' ?! b8 E8 v- x6 V5 `+ Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, S2 N# A" B. I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

; R7 q! c! N2 _  i  q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>