【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& z! n8 g4 e; g5 U/ K. L9 R3 V+ |% eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' ?* F& \* f3 s; b  B/ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 _7 R6 \0 c; HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, a( p$ f! o2 m6 q) N  {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# R" i2 d" `- G: n9 ?- }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 ]! L& x7 j8 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; f2 s, ~: b2 c5 ]$ XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; P) ]( \6 S6 z& d- L7 g7 yI want so much to see inside your heart
. G9 E# o2 K8 G3 V+ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- s' B# ?  U1 Y" B4 ]( HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) \2 b2 A9 w# \8 l6 T8 VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 I1 P  [; {2 U$ u* l$ BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; G+ ^8 P% {1 Y+ Z5 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ F- z7 y; O8 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! I- d9 @  X$ {7 z. F0 v$ t5 ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% ^* d; w. {5 v0 O% y: V5 n6 u# T# @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% q. S* [: M0 ?0 P! c/ x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  i  d, Q0 ]+ ]. ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; y1 v/ Q( B, _. R" U6 A3 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  c5 G. W; x+ j% w( P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! [4 j* s( a! x- u* e* T<P>你无需担心</P>
# m4 ^' r  m0 u5 O* A4 c% N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! z" C" p: B* G2 j& X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 O8 R& T. W; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 A  \9 K6 y' z8 z6 V" l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" ]# g; U- U" G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; ^$ d1 u0 R- u4 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ [( M* x7 c2 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 t+ q( V1 X& a* b# A5 M5 Y) g3 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# E' h# r. E  l) R  k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. y& @7 ]8 Y; r" m4 ~/ ]% G' f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 K) ^' I+ u1 l4 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ E6 t' s* B. l( U. r5 s2 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  w, _7 f0 P, \- A* |$ ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 w- C" \( P8 A7 d6 D9 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 ?0 w4 z0 Y, E0 O$ o# u: O: m  n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ P; s: c: y. {, f) k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. V7 c2 [4 c8 X5 }; f" g7 {! n: B0 Y* m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 B: @7 U, j# s/ [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 U# L  l+ x5 ?; C9 H5 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>