【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 I5 ^+ K6 o1 m5 A3 h  ]# w' OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 C/ f; D2 T2 A5 G' ?$ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& i  v6 M# J3 {' ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# V/ F% f$ Z1 k6 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
" E9 l  z  v; KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, C$ J6 [8 N  @, k: n) xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, w1 B# p, C. ?8 L# R. WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, l- y/ w$ v  z4 e& \# jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 k$ E/ {# Z$ H6 SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" ~& q0 m9 w: \4 E' {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ |1 m' U, c+ Z. _" k: N9 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* n0 u( H0 c& e. I5 n! o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ u( M7 O! X" n- m* A: S- \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 w8 L, Z& _3 I  z, d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. F8 G- w' f) \( |) Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ g" N6 x$ J+ T4 ], C! h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 @& S; j: t" m4 H' L9 ]0 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 p- w* z3 I" w; n4 U1 k: o/ U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 {+ p. U* \( D6 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 a8 M2 \) V0 w; z0 u0 L" i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& T) ?- M% x7 x0 l; b" o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 B& \) s7 P6 r3 B) F: D1 |! H$ l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 ]! ~) f0 F& ?6 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; [8 b' t; l9 \! h: }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; f; {/ w2 k% @/ d: e  ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ F1 g; q9 h" |/ H/ p+ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; t/ {) Z) t: V$ i7 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. m' y4 r- ^3 v7 t5 e2 Q9 B9 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. _# E1 V* Y% p+ O/ l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# B/ x, k# ^- _  G' m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 _$ D5 I3 w; |0 ]) p( J0 Z/ n4 ^. d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& K3 F! h: ]! B3 i; Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 ?) M% u3 U+ c' E/ h% U) E0 O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( L" p: w  o/ Z% s) P' J: X" [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ N& i$ {! X; _1 Q. Z- M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>