【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ _% n6 S/ @. f2 z歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* c$ H( ]/ f6 k6 x/ r! S- [3 A8 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% Z; `- \' k: C# c& s! ]2 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ K4 c5 g# [9 x) H) f+ b: A8 U7 cWith the moon kissing it every night
1 s/ T- C/ ^- e/ Z2 z" R- pSeeing the sky content with its love
4 b" r  H7 g; X) `8 z* ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) r) D0 F8 k: O- sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 b  W( O- `2 L# k$ l7 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# M& r  \4 b2 W: x6 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& x" G6 J2 ~+ k* b# S8 t' x4 B' pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' U) q- }: t* `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 J$ P3 r4 I# _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 X/ N  }3 l, H# Z5 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. t* o7 `/ V* W3 m& D7 C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 j: v/ y0 C2 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* w6 X% N- r  I2 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; ]1 Z2 d  @5 @/ p* Z% T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# j0 d) b0 [7 H; D  W3 f- Y0 A# Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 D" f0 `' R* Q5 ^1 E- m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 c- @7 C/ a5 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 B) m! z% J7 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* C0 ^4 @1 a6 V) x; n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ R; Y9 c7 J  ~- l7 Z0 x# w3 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 }; W6 f" s' q. x+ f6 d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 E9 |/ b) x$ Q. C. D( t; y0 H) ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) I3 a9 j* F$ G8 Y3 Z& Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" Y' Y1 N/ h/ r5 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* x( w4 b# u# F+ {! y/ m' m1 c; \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ `  U+ n; \7 o% \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% Q2 [, _. J. U4 c6 L' z) ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 L0 g9 }4 g3 Y/ p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( g7 y. e9 I4 j- w1 T) O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 L% E% b# J# U; ^( J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 _1 a/ ^  f8 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* h9 b& j' w. J$ m<P>I regret not dying</P>
' s* U- F1 E: ?- @) }/ Y* v; `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 m9 q5 W" M4 {: h8 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- p+ y0 N: s9 h" \2 H( b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ m" T, G: F! D$ y, |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  S3 G6 a& v. ], q2 t, u! s/ k/ A9 L$ j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  D5 ~* ^+ z. }2 M! d7 ?2 e6 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 E2 [" g3 F7 e) R1 [4 u4 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>