【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: L9 \4 f. o0 ^1 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, h* L! g: A& Y, t7 G3 Y3 V& O$ aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 p1 M' m: ~. w4 U  SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 f3 P3 U) z6 V3 P3 W, ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% K: e! H  o) d/ K: [! n2 T/ J9 S0 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ A( T2 W- ]. q- d+ Q; s# pI really want to know just how much you love me
: R8 E2 I$ r- l% uI love you I love you with all my heart
; ?. c0 N( d' {( VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 q3 F" Y) i4 W' I. {7 A9 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  c; B% V4 \$ Z$ T0 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% Y8 s6 I9 n$ r; PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 |( B( X  d: r, S2 y; H; EI regret not dying
' u' |- M1 R% }! F, k$ ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% A9 E! `) H7 n" b# u- m2 hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 z, A8 ~' L- M: L2 `- p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: ~0 `; h% ]. {: M2 N* ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ Q, {" h, Y) f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 D, p; _* o% `$ l. v# H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# J8 o6 J% p5 t0 U! A  m  w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) k3 K3 m" y* P$ B* K# H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# h& `; Z$ i+ M! {% F% f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 I3 q! p% Z# b$ L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 t! ^, Z! h( ^3 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 P5 x& [6 y" W, H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 T: t' Q3 n: `# @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! D% K) i" J  s0 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, B: ]9 u- x  K1 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( Z, }+ d: G( ?7 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ T- d, X3 a3 F# b0 e" ]! A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
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<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 C- G: t. a$ n, M8 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( c' N' j1 T1 k* I1 Z0 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. |6 G( L- P( ]. Z8 q' P: w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 |! Z7 j5 W% I  |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, N! h! Z- X! l6 T9 v( F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 Q# [) e# d  {) v* u1 t, Z: Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& T0 B! I, }5 N. F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ l  |9 f8 `# l' U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 G6 l% O8 J4 f  _& |; e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, {6 _& L: g- T) d! o0 r8 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% M' r) P# q: q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# \4 B$ G  p4 s' z, T. l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; h. q4 Q2 g6 ^9 c+ |7 ^6 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>