【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 l8 W2 U* Q4 K  \1 B歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. [5 m8 s0 j; W& W% [. s, w5 I( o. C  gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, d' U  X" }" O- LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; `# E$ U( T2 u  u. D. z: ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 `" ?) x, I1 E% ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( H0 v8 W( O4 Q3 gEvery other word you utter is love
  L, Q- B- W: k; V; dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& E, a! Z  V- uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& v/ l/ _6 d7 g5 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 @5 B9 @, A4 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 |' h4 L6 e3 y# ]$ W( f1 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ F. ]  S) K- I9 R( t7 lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 T6 |) B( H3 W( U( d# }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 Q1 k" i. S8 l5 f  Z: _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% @6 E1 w* n0 O  S  ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 M( `$ j* v  o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) H/ ]; y' ?* j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 y4 F- c4 Q8 c$ n# r7 V( X( T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 i- ^& D& Z, G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ^7 F* s8 K* s; f0 e+ K7 O; k1 \% K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# O  X% N  Y5 I- i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ F9 `3 _5 G: i6 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& ?2 R0 c0 W5 W- G: U2 w8 e) ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& z  ^+ ]) T/ P. x4 d( ], D0 o) Z. C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, |. R. b& n6 i* l$ t2 s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% D  T/ K/ J( P6 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& t  E: _0 ^' [, q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 a: N8 U" b9 A6 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 V1 A3 ?2 Q) v* l. |' K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" c  W% K& _1 o/ I) q- O) C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( a4 V( V  T* ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 q7 D& L' r. p  E4 ^' B" W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% \- x  X3 i; D( p, d& W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) Q- j6 m' g1 z& _: z% Q( Q. d) o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 o8 r4 Q, _# @- M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) u: m# W# g. F" @/ v" m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ]+ a2 s* m, h4 M9 q6 ^' ^) |4 c2 g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! _: _* U8 F/ Y- O3 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>