【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 I; q2 f6 A! w& ~% s, z5 l! f/ j歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ E5 k3 B: |/ w9 T: }7 Z& gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" S4 E$ O5 w5 I& Q9 b# M8 S2 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* e, Z7 S: h# p( H  j. _( N; t3 C$ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 e9 U# [- k: ]" yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' d1 S7 t) h7 F/ wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 e# f) N( F( a: P8 ^; c. cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ g+ G( ]0 l$ \0 S; O7 a" VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 P) z( p+ m' u2 iI want so much to see inside your heart
& q+ n* E: m: y4 ~* K# fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 R2 c7 ]# e5 Z% E2 O+ KI’m still filled with fear
& W* j; ]; z3 t+ g  ~7 o" ?1 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: j: q$ @; \8 V5 r$ Q( ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 e* U* Y: ]/ s; D/ A+ |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 u, s/ \  F7 N. p* K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ S7 b- T* u% w% |3 E. z: y+ W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 ]# Y. C( d$ Y) k1 `, U, f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& o5 }, q9 b+ x$ C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! m# C. {. ^' S" @: v1 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. E4 a6 n% z1 t& c  j+ s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; l! I  N# T8 D8 \<P>你无需担心</P>
( v7 r* H! n' D( E8 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 K" O6 C6 ^2 ^: e- M# h8 `7 o1 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 q7 p; p7 Y0 D. e7 o5 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. t2 Q1 O2 c9 O, K2 G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% ~% F/ t/ G5 T: |0 k9 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 e* F  P+ f) R1 E3 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( {( n& ^/ L$ I% g% A3 C. l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 T# V4 n, y1 N, z. i+ f" G7 Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! a8 n3 G( W& s/ g% V0 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ~' C) A7 F! q* g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* H! j) h6 C4 w/ l1 p1 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 U& [! B, j- O  V: F* Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: I: R! M3 c; ]. k' Z' I9 |  g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ Q  j! D1 L- H1 T/ r& d! H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 p1 _% f$ ~7 ?3 Q, H$ j; O  c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, q  D4 U4 B% [% A) y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" x8 W# v* a: @. L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 p8 I. f/ e; i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 R! T( p: E# D( E) S1 I0 @( n) V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* x3 v, W4 J! c% }) T  y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>