【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, i0 _2 I& j3 `6 s3 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; E/ K' q" n) }- \0 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 ]+ |9 b8 K! N) g$ I9 z- VWith the moon kissing it every night
' o" k5 i) Z/ M5 y( M! QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! p7 K4 j# C( r8 p+ {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, U. L( N  T# I' ^0 l5 T6 YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; m' E) |3 C. z$ R5 ~- U  |I love you I love you with all my heart
! P" L" r% e1 R$ A2 K) D, Y0 LNothing can compare to my love
% u' h( l0 W0 R, ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- j7 f% M, W! r; v! }$ _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Q5 w$ k$ _1 T) G6 Y- [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! K6 T& {5 \" t1 TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 g5 e* J9 H6 u: c/ [* aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. {& X# l# E8 W3 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 s  l5 c. m: K8 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 e+ _/ `  z4 U- j. o! v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- D3 B4 Y' B0 _/ K$ ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) ^! y8 R) U1 N; }. y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, h9 D1 D% H6 M( K! @7 t( Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* q" q/ [4 E, @) R7 p; b/ d! B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 f$ S' y: l8 ^, {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- V4 n2 e# u' s1 |6 W" x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* S9 k; w" p% s2 P9 p) x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: H& T( v9 i' N, b  U+ y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" c: }, z8 g( @. |4 P- m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% r4 J& k' d: k+ J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 M  c: ?. Z* q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; @5 s' |4 F- g2 Y% ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& _* O# |) D4 P3 v2 A  ~2 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! J. Z  @8 e! R# X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) t- a  d* N* G5 W+ j' ]; N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 e0 z9 ?6 I% Y  O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. @! Y3 g; I# H% p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% ^$ v0 h) _* N* t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ {7 d* s* G4 ?, @, a- c7 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( g7 d6 n9 B5 s7 Y5 `7 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ]7 M- p0 i/ r! |3 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
( H) Z! r. S4 R1 @% q# M3 H; y; J& K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 J! r" o) Y5 R  }9 _! e& y' o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( {2 h7 p' P: [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. n% S/ M6 o4 G2 n1 B: d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* e! S! ^! ?4 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 p3 b( b0 R# f; ~9 e) W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>