【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. w- D9 ^/ W: K1 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' i$ |0 i, V- M2 v& G! Z6 p9 pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- A  V) W5 @0 w% e' ]0 e! wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* J. u. V2 Z7 s  h! K; k2 H" c0 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 d& w) W7 T# m/ n( z$ {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& j* i0 N  N: q! J- r+ C2 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& @7 o  j7 ^: K4 YI want so much to see inside your heart
; J' X# v3 u) ~0 }0 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: L5 Z: G. @$ F2 k+ u, r6 dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 Q5 R" |# y2 W- K: x' gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- K, K  j% h% h( y/ K; A" URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% `; C! j" }( V; t( ~: l& T% u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; o2 j- d$ z8 q6 v: `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: w/ f/ I) ~+ }6 d: E. ^' v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 `; M* V* B. O( t# X" _$ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# Z) h; ^9 c# f2 S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 S  J/ @4 |& M9 r- ?8 I, K4 W8 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 d6 ^& x" A  W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* S0 K: Y! @% g; p6 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: U; l! r7 l# w5 {' F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% C! ^6 G1 y& \  u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' f, z! {  H# S) `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, K3 Q6 P. W; _$ s/ u: C2 Q1 b0 a6 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& j7 `2 F, Z3 s/ t, q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& w8 I) S/ S3 {6 g' o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  X8 z8 g* a- n9 _* B$ V3 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: p- M3 }% n( G# M/ X3 w+ h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# D( \) |% X" h7 i  O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# a' D# J7 y# v& P5 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 U  C% b% W8 h# `* {; p) K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! j. z2 M! n) `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; T; b! |; C' K; X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, N7 X/ `9 c& B; |6 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 I4 d6 T8 Z  r" T( ]1 X2 s. n. B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: P( q8 F  N, {' h  @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 N3 R5 q! @6 y9 I, b' c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% u+ n" ?) ~; F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>