【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ u: ]/ H* D% q- j$ _我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  v0 ~% f) z9 F" _* F( s( ~+ jWe meet and talk everyday,
# g9 i2 d+ k5 C; Z8 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ V% K- k8 h9 m8 ]! h7 ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- {  W7 T  u" K( e+ H. a  v; c. HI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) b$ h: z3 y- y5 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 ~' O+ u3 o2 r* KI want to confess that I love you,
9 \. ^) s3 A* m8 Z8 Y7 L% PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 S" Q- E3 i- P" b9 x" V+ CEntrust my love within your heart
# o0 y3 b$ d& {7 z2 p$ d0 PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ G1 e& U* y- ?! c7 @0 QI want to confess that I love you,
$ _  y( v( P5 c* UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 Q3 w; j" a5 w. f7 c2 }% BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 {8 |% C3 ^2 w2 }" Z7 x6 C0 T/ M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* W" B) _7 D0 q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  }9 T' Q# U% F! n& H! T% E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) K( Q* K3 c" \; ^9 Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 I- G( b) ^$ e- Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' S& c% Y/ Z& V) X3 |+ r: K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 Z% `- @* {& W2 B" X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- Z& a8 d) u/ ~% T: x2 x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ U. v. p% |' C; T) o7 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 y- n5 ~% A- [, o2 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ s. `$ `0 W8 ~* W" G6 ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* F$ t" ~6 x; e6 @! P, J3 y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 \2 B" S8 E" B2 c0 i) D7 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" Z' p7 t% N5 `3 w. e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& l* E9 v4 V; ^9 q: i/ u! Z<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 x3 y# O4 T' g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# @+ A- v: D7 |2 n3 x  u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( w& D3 V: v  t* ?# i: M# Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 H" p1 V- @  ~/ R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 u9 Q" l/ o1 ~7 O- D# G3 ?" s" B9 _3 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  ~/ b! i' w0 Z2 m/ C- U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; m  ~; K" V6 \. m! @8 ?! q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; _1 ?$ ]% g3 Q) z% }7 }9 L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  L# N/ t8 K: e% h; o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 {4 P' P! x4 Z! h" k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ _7 A9 r2 [- `) y* f# p5 y& u2 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 B, Y( a# h2 ~0 C8 W  F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ {) w  `9 O& e" p" k; W4 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 Y! _- M3 [. m6 w' B0 T) _! I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 l; F; I$ \/ M0 {! k, r4 \1 i  {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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) l8 F8 x( [% w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" d$ T; Q0 S" U% J, q# Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>