【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! U  z- f: j" E  d我另将歌词附在此。
7 t" ]5 \$ g( n8 [* e/ j% _0 oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! Z4 e6 F: n# {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! f; C% l0 a  k2 Z8 VFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ c+ o; H! W' @6 dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 n, |* Y/ Q8 Y. DI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  \6 K% w- m& ?7 H0 MIf today isn’t too late,
" L' t: S7 }5 s$ yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* E% u2 Z1 d' Y9 O4 }) B# YCan I entrust it to you?
4 u! L2 O7 B6 t2 kEntrust my love within your heart
4 E/ u4 z0 ^$ }: t9 XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  c$ ]7 G# F0 r) ^8 ^. C3 ^4 XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ z+ L2 ?. V% B+ O, e1 VIf today isn’t too late,
" v* R( j- P# D- @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ |' l! ]) f( t( ]2 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& z2 E" u$ u) u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ t& l% t4 x1 P5 O. h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 K) ]# |. ^1 ]& a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- \0 k% I! H- {: E/ B( E) E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 E" ^) |: j4 @- L6 H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, @3 d; t9 H( \  C2 g1 f0 I0 h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 j0 a$ z9 s1 p  F) P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( N/ D: J3 |% X+ a! B: m+ t9 }( E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 i# u' c+ d% A. x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- t. ^* Q7 m! _6 Z6 J2 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 S  j/ _+ d' F4 w: M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 L7 H) S' I* {5 G1 k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& W/ q( Z, |' x" j8 m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- U0 `! ^% y( w6 L7 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 O8 @* @. f9 P' |. c4 r2 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# E% ?; p  K& R  z4 p/ ~% B  |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" ^) a% p. e4 a( ?+ y9 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 A) Y! H/ z  C* H  p) ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 ~) p4 H; V& m! Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: _( V, H8 o1 c& T- x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) m& X( \! X  p1 Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' S5 `) ?" {' a' H: H8 Z% a<P>But I never did </P>
+ u( t) M. O$ I+ q+ x# l; u<P>但我不会 </P>
( p& q  ?+ R! V$ u0 k$ U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 g& C* {1 e1 e' H* q5 B% [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; P2 A8 h% U0 ?, j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  s0 f  d: y1 E& y1 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 }, ^4 r, q/ `# Z; u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* ?5 G; ^# T) A# R$ X- {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  ^1 N6 C$ T( b& b% I" Q4 B2 s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>