【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 j- h$ X" e  ^9 R+ [4 rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 E) B! b- r' G  |& mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% h& X- j$ e+ o( t! v8 W! k  d: EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  p$ ^6 @' X( ^7 _* ?9 }' d7 sIf today isn’t too late,
1 |! n, @0 C; DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 J+ N  u" M4 W3 d- d. K9 zEntrust my love within your heart
1 v6 J, y9 I  uLove… just the word love
! y5 L# b3 k4 i" J& BWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 t; c, t* A6 @1 \8 w& G: UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% V, F: R% j( W' G+ y4 X1 bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, x. U; A$ R9 Q$ ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 r/ O( p" v/ ]/ c, ICan I entrust it to you?
% k, j4 G  O: z$ X  [$ MEntrust my love within your heart
, n  u! k' u8 o% q* dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, G; E9 x3 A, ?" z$ x[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' Q+ \7 u* Q3 A" P( J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; {, ^' I7 l! y6 m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" N2 i- S+ f1 E6 Y# q( y# l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ _6 e# I7 u. L. J. q$ T7 f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ u- V/ b1 _! }/ U4 l% p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 [+ G) m4 e  a! B- B! m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: e: w8 I0 R6 v/ k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: F" A" M* b- O. Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: {, s0 u  B: _) m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' M8 Y" s  V9 Q/ L3 g" C/ u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 m. c1 H6 ~7 O. X  p1 ~% h  _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, U0 T5 ?6 `! [$ B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" w. T5 D. i1 v1 G, W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# r' X: R" T( r: ~5 z' T/ u( z6 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 n4 e+ g; T3 X) F2 q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) i2 R8 z2 P7 h( r1 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- {# J$ W* J: r# j* C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- M0 J9 L& K4 `+ y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 [9 t3 M8 T! y. p4 l: u+ m( {5 O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( R5 ]+ f" R; m- e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" D- H# n& f# }0 Q+ y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 q- V- u/ T! a: f. [<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ j$ g! z& \) [" z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ ^; x: ^: V3 J' p* M: v6 Y7 Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 E6 e+ e3 r) L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 G3 Z7 B! E$ n7 {& E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* M6 X9 h) V2 ?, _- b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; O4 K- ]" e- r/ G; y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( d% u2 H  C5 O/ T$ C$ }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 g: G  V3 [7 I3 B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  c4 w0 w2 }2 S2 I! }, s: q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% D& f- c( p. p$ M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" z; \% x  ?% p3 N' K! Z; }' u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>