【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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$ b+ q6 ?' _4 s7 j3 M% P1 f7 Z我另将歌词附在此。
" s7 k7 k8 k# l( D& }6 eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 ]5 d0 H2 A: y7 H/ w7 q% CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 B7 s7 E/ p# C6 V6 ^6 g- WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! u2 W8 [1 B  e$ V. Q: S! II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" L& _3 @, B  _( ABut I never did
7 h6 l- W  s/ K4 k( F- d3 L3 c0 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 `" W7 z1 j' ?2 R( QEntrust my love within your heart
* s+ D$ K- C$ u$ z; @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) O! Q8 Y5 `+ sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' f8 E% ?8 D% f2 A/ `5 b; vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  Q' |/ x  {. G- aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 m; I5 T/ R& F% i' Y% C! BCan I entrust it to you?
' o8 }$ V+ u; X* v& sEntrust my love within your heart

3 w- J3 x3 D/ }6 u! V8 X3 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* Y4 n+ g7 i6 O; v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  p* U$ J* d  }5 r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 f2 {) ]$ b/ r. ]& w3 c; `1 ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& a. w/ ]) b+ }% N& \6 R4 o1 p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ V9 w1 g& `; O- t$ I, \6 Q7 P<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 R5 f; \& |$ b9 _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 K3 d4 Z' `; r5 i8 Y/ \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 ]. T9 T0 v2 s# T* |6 |1 ]5 B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" d+ P3 Q1 T, c- k<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' G- w6 c& l. j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" C* F1 @( ?  e' X7 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. L8 w4 B( s" U7 Z- x5 Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* k1 I  P0 a( |3 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  e% B, S; X  F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ X4 k- s; K$ \) T4 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 F7 f3 f/ g8 e8 ~6 h" b! S. _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" x' ~1 ~$ Z$ z5 O3 r6 Z<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ b  q1 C" q' c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ o+ b8 _. p( z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# r( b. E8 L5 }. c1 ?! G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- h  L* F' d  F/ d% y0 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 C5 V- X; {0 P! }: F1 T/ [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, W8 _" W2 e  c' a/ g; f1 F5 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& g# J& }! y% s5 K6 L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 V" G" ^6 S+ ~3 B( c8 D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>