【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" v" S6 z0 F5 \9 ?% J- f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: Q, Q! x0 s- |( `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: u8 Q' s' m0 _! L% ZWe meet and talk everyday,
# `( @. O6 O3 D# ?+ C7 j% e% sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) ^* c& i, u3 ]. F$ U1 QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  Q3 c6 s  {5 o% T0 z6 u8 DBut I never did
( @8 S, H6 ?8 u, ?& r5 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" V$ Y" r9 S; c8 ]: ~# I; {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" b1 ~: g' [; H+ m  jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 X$ a. ~! m8 f0 ~5 b! yCan I entrust it to you?
, Y! G2 y, J! W1 p0 l' N7 h0 NEntrust my love within your heart
! }) b! C; B  ^5 |+ f- ALove… just the word love
7 i" D+ u& T( V+ w6 w/ \* A' _. iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 j/ d: d+ G8 G' EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 k* ]5 v, v/ y, AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 U# v( S, r9 g% D( I( h+ @Can I entrust it to you?
0 H/ ]+ v4 B& d7 G2 W/ iEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ d' a6 C  V1 \7 M: y& eEntrust my love within your heart

5 j7 F0 M6 c9 s3 E! U3 k: M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" X, F. M+ }; Q6 v! g/ Q3 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 x+ \. r7 b3 z0 c3 x/ r4 q7 B# \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& t6 [6 }& M3 p9 z, f3 W' Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# S0 [! X4 ]/ u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 p1 P; q( |* _6 o, u  O0 G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ V, [" i: v' B0 _6 U' Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ D* \: H/ j& b) _6 t( `) D- d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* e6 w& Z! K2 B) n- c) S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 q* u/ R2 t" a) X! F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* q( D# p0 u( W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* _* B5 [6 i0 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ J" t1 U) P) y! ?/ V9 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: F: G8 |' z) B: w, x( ^* ^; B- t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 A$ x5 h) P8 B+ m7 k' F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 r' W$ n- ~: b- {. v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 N! o1 l2 t3 ?& ~7 ~" K* U2 n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& ?' C5 H; G7 I$ }3 L9 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; l9 h: t  M* s% H" J# Y7 ~8 q9 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: ~% c6 H$ U" `) n2 z4 M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ }$ z( [9 F, c. ^+ K+ O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  p7 A. A6 h' W2 c  U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% m8 v3 M: L; {- x6 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) M; ^( H% D8 L# R% D& @$ Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, o8 U9 f* p, T; p! H) ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 t3 y6 W. z  d+ c2 O/ o) |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" X) L6 z8 x  Y: F6 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) D- Y) U, Q9 j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 m) C% r6 ]/ v- ~# k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>