【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ U# U9 Q4 g* Y' t) X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; v  ^! @6 q; P0 l7 lI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. `* u) B( V* fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ r8 `! W7 f6 C7 l1 tI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) a2 v& {4 `) C4 T5 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 u+ R0 k# K4 u) o' X/ KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 _! q' D. w& s4 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 `0 b) C0 j2 P* X# Y% d( ?Can I entrust it to you?
4 f/ l. M  L4 x, [5 gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 e$ `9 z( H% ]/ |/ `2 k1 A: JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% B. G+ Q. M8 Y2 F/ e  qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 A2 m+ X0 t1 n6 Y6 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 H3 Z4 y8 ^8 C- X+ A% nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 B5 y/ R5 y! U$ D, {" [* P% VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& E) {" y$ Z$ W& \$ \: v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 i. u3 w& M; l4 W8 I5 Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 _3 E' p% X0 R3 X) g2 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: Q" q8 K+ F  a$ E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 O0 y) o1 {  z- H/ G, Z; ?& i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( u0 F. s1 D% d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: b" ^' G0 q) |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 Z; B  U9 l! o# r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; i- f+ o! E" A# z& V1 R6 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( ~* N4 ?2 G2 I# R3 {8 ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 x& v0 o( j6 F6 e<P>但我不会</P>
: K# f& b) e# e, Z% I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 w/ d( T, y2 s# I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 r, o& _+ x" ]* j1 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& m& |0 K3 }# i' X% g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' n' X/ f1 O' n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: w; A2 X  E# g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! s, d* ]; [0 Z  r! S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) k3 x  _' `4 Q$ a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% r$ _) [0 \* s. E# a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 b* N( h0 q) J% b# a4 ?* r; j" c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: D0 [' @4 g/ K& `( Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) ?+ I* ^- g7 T- h" X. Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' r8 t0 i1 ]7 y  j" i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 b  b% H* H9 \) k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 n9 X! _8 K) H6 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 }) N* g- b3 |+ E, S1 W+ A; Q, [% d' v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 _- M$ s: r/ z) K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 d$ \( d, V$ g. f  w$ j: {% U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ M% D5 j2 h: Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>