【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
, Y" O, q: L: _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) |$ s, g+ e/ j/ B( H0 gFrom the first moment we met,
( A$ o* c( M2 o, [- H' f% BI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 I5 y5 B" j5 ?6 r  T/ d$ ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& Y/ h# T! n! b5 U$ [, o  \- kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ s" x2 a' [( I8 O# Z' |Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! L  m% I1 ?- y& i( l6 H- a6 ~1 bI want to confess that I love you,
; D$ j4 M% M/ e8 LBut I never did
& m- m% j  c/ h% pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" X& q0 t5 r3 x( }) dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, K7 n$ g6 v- s1 ?6 i6 z8 fCan I entrust it to you?
$ M' x# w- _! S3 }) x- _Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* Z+ j/ u6 N8 vBut I never did
1 B, A% |4 U9 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 R. c" `6 O3 |( bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# u; ~1 v/ N8 M# w0 ?* j$ G' cEntrust my love within your heart
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" s6 v3 C6 p; R, F) Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& }2 E" e0 T9 c/ Q) A* F; q+ e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: w/ Y& g( b7 E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( h* L" x: K  _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 J0 R0 Z0 v7 }. V8 o) F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: @( Q5 \2 j, k1 A: V0 {# s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- N9 j7 E) @% F4 u7 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 O: L. A& K2 o& X7 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) R, x* B; {4 J/ H  {7 P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# Q2 C( O9 |7 U/ W9 K2 n$ H+ F. i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 Q$ j0 l" @4 }* l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 B6 P. u, @1 I% y, ^5 N! |$ I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 V* l4 a/ q. I/ M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. J5 s8 }+ V& }# g. v: a6 q7 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' L; @: [% `% e& Q. i2 _$ `6 T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 G; L9 Y/ H9 Z& \* j: t# n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  ]! p4 N7 ~* b+ R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# V0 g& u8 V: a$ z* {# K. C& i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: N0 p' j* Y; @% p' T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. h  }, G% X; R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* a4 A" B# Y; O5 Z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ y* p( d1 `3 G* }, y* S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* X; W) S$ x4 x# k4 Q" H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: V" ^/ _7 I% z7 B: {3 H5 f) V: x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 Z8 J3 J; l7 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" y! D9 T2 v% x' o0 L0 [* G, p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>