【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 i$ V  H- \5 W! }" n/ ~6 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 {7 a2 Z  R5 y, Z' S( v$ e2 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  z0 a7 `" o7 H4 y: X! {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& N' k) g( a; R/ B8 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 T, @- S7 n! L1 S. iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' s- P8 H! P: M, a, z) a; U& iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ T' ]' ?/ W+ k. mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; e" {- R5 J) g: ~  U, N2 fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& j/ M/ ?0 `4 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 v: e: E- K1 e: ^: _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ ~4 q% _$ E9 y& w/ x9 F% \, VYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" c- e& U0 U& e( j9 TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ @+ E: Z7 t0 I/ _. Y0 p8 O* R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ a  w' J  o, J  p3 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( D# Y. I, ^/ r1 s' b9 @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* H# u* {2 d- A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 [0 L4 I, P* }) f$ ~6 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( j. Y. y9 O+ R6 Z! Q; {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ f8 w* m6 z  S0 T) e- n2 v+ H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% y  Y; p' f7 n" s0 d: P. C2 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 P# v0 a. y- u5 P9 X1 T: H  V' B% W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 H! \( G4 N3 z. q- O' E- H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; Q3 x: t+ J5 C3 L  K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! r0 u% f8 R1 M3 w4 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  T: b+ Q& g, B' ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 A" Z+ _8 O  e& Z1 N& f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 r- [- a# E' R0 l9 B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 V+ \/ j% H2 f0 i# M8 S* p* x7 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( Q+ @) |5 O! _( k! S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* m" q  F9 f) S$ p. @& R* H5 d( d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 [8 p6 L5 I0 Z' T& M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" V5 ^/ `- {: c9 I! Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; c  w; ~* C. ^6 w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! Q6 m# M: S: p& Y/ N. `1 q* k) h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 e) b7 }0 _) g2 V& N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 z( p" ^; }3 n. e& H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" ]. I& z, T) v$ q( N' ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' u. V; D; F9 Y" Q% N7 n5 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 y. L$ \' [! @9 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; Y0 L) t2 _' q3 k5 u& t3 S! _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>